in rare form

Thursday, April 3, 2008

you are the ocean that erases writings in the sand
your love is the force behind the tide
your passion is the burning rays of sun
and my love is the wind; invisible yet it cannot hide

my heart is the sand, marred with footprints
my smile is the blue sky, a reflection of you
my soul is a rock whose core you have touched
and losing you is the worst thing i could ever do

3 thought(s):

Ananda said...

beautiful poem. go head sistalove poetess.

KreativeMix said...

loving and feeling this poem!!!

antithesis said...

thank YOU!!!